Cutting Room Floor
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Cutting Room Floor
Cutting Room Floor
Believe that with breathing
some kind of wretched crashes the
inside of the cell. Knocking over
this ceramic red light, throbbing
violently on the shining black floor.
Tapes revolve and litter, mountains of
celluloid to satisfy this famine of tastes,
of lack for lighted visions.
Some kind of censorship paces these
traces of confessions. Unconsumed, tattering
to be the whole of a discarded teenage fantasy.
Sometimes, watching you slave away all
your days over the cutting room floor, I
desire to know why I carve sympathica into
the stills and photography of salvation
for an incomprehensible empathica.
LOve, Sel.
Believe that with breathing
some kind of wretched crashes the
inside of the cell. Knocking over
this ceramic red light, throbbing
violently on the shining black floor.
Tapes revolve and litter, mountains of
celluloid to satisfy this famine of tastes,
of lack for lighted visions.
Some kind of censorship paces these
traces of confessions. Unconsumed, tattering
to be the whole of a discarded teenage fantasy.
Sometimes, watching you slave away all
your days over the cutting room floor, I
desire to know why I carve sympathica into
the stills and photography of salvation
for an incomprehensible empathica.
LOve, Sel.
Celena_J- Number of posts : 16
Registration date : 2008-03-18
Re: Cutting Room Floor
Does anyone have any idea how I could make the last stanza better?
LOve, Sel.
LOve, Sel.
Celena_J- Number of posts : 16
Registration date : 2008-03-18
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